Third Draft - Charlotte Woodward

This is my 3rd draft in filming. I have made some adjustments: I have added some audio - this is just a sample, I have a few others in which I am experimenting with. I have found my audio through a copy-right CD called 'drones and pulses'. I have gotten rid of the loud 'bang' noise the girl hears as I feel it looks untidy. I need the girl to hear the bang, have another take, then the close up of her face to make it more realistic. Therefore, I'm going to find a sound effect that will work better, and I will add it to a different clip.