First Draft of Film - Charlotte Woodward

This is the first draft of my project. There are some changes and added clips to be made. I have still to add an establishing shot of the house I have filmed in, and add a couple more odd shots to make the scenes match up. Some clips could be made tighter to increase intensity. There has been some feedback from my friends and family over the idea of the 'stalker' appearing in the window at the start - some think its too soon to reveal who the stalker is as you see his face, some say I should keep it as it scared them.