First Draft of Film & Edit - Kim Bradbury

This is my first attempt of my filming, I am quite happy with it although I understand that some alterations need to be made.

I like how the begging had turned out, which I have taken my inspiration from "Fargo" well. However I want to create an establishing shot of the house but I also want this to be an over the shoulder shot from the  intrudor aswell, this will give a sence that somebody is there without it being too obvious.

I also do not like that I revealed the stalker so clearly.